Saturday 11 February 2017

Teacher Feedback Response- Draft Magazine

Front Cover:

Looking at the feedback from my teacher he has only recommended to move my barcode but looking at my audience feedback I am continuing my decision to change my main image as I feel I can have a better framed image that will attract my target audience more.

Contents Page:

For my contents page, I have been told to brighten my images, make my text smaller and to change my page number. I will take on board this feedback ensuring my magazine looks as effective and realistic as possible but I am also going to change my image on the left to a male model image as this ensures my magazine will stand out to my target audience (50% male 50% female).

Double Page Spread:

I have been asked to change my title so it isn't just the band name and looking at various double page spreads I can see the variations of headings which I will decide upon in the future ensuring it relates to my artist name. I need to make my writer and photographer credit text smaller to ensure that it doesn't take the attention away from my artist image as well as making that image bigger and brighter. I am going to change my smaller image as I can now see it doesn't work with the styling of my magazine so I think I am going to change it to an image of them all sitting down which could be a symbolic meaning of how they started low in their career but are building themselves up. I have been given assurance by my teacher that it is a good idea which shows my magazine will attract my target audience as it will be intriguing.

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