Front Cover:
I have been told that my colours and title work really well which assures me that they will stand out to my target audience along side the font I chose which tells me that I do not need to change any of these aspects. I have been suggested to change my image having brighter lipstick which is a feature I was considering anyway as I didn't feel it suited with my genre and target audience and I can see from my audience feedback that they also agree with this. I have had the suggestion to have less text on the side which I will take on board as I understand it looks very crowded so I may space the text out more so my front cover is more appealing to the audience.
Contents Page:
I have had the suggestion from two feedback responses to change my image on the left which I am going to do to a male model who is 17 years old and I feel he will work with the magazine style I want. This ensures that my target audience of 50% male and 50% female will be interested in my magazine. I have been told that my colours work well together and my font is good so I will not change either of these. I am going to make a few minor adjustments when I have my teacher feedback ensuring my magazine is as attractive and eye catching as possible.
Double Page Spread:
I only need to make a few minor adjustments for my double page spread brightening the image, moving it slightly and swapping the image in the article. I will look at my teacher response before I make any improvements.
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